Where the action begins?
Eddie's job was maintaining the rides. On one day afternoon, at the Ruby Pier, he worked the park and checked each attraction, such as broken boards, loose bolts, worn-out steel an so on. After checking all attractions, Eddie found some problems. A little girl was thrumming of the equipment.
Where the key events happened?
Before one hour the accident happen, Eddie walked along the Ruby pier. That day was Eddie's birthday, his 83 years old. Eddie communicated with a old couple in the amusement park and remind something when he was young. Nearly twenty left, Eddie talked and played with some children. During the progress of playing with children ar the car poles. he still checked the attraction of the rides. The other twenty minutes left, something happened, A woman found a small crowd gathered around a small girl. Eddie tried his best to save the little girl, but it was too late. The carts were dropping, and then......
Where the events ended?
After carts falling at Ruby Pier, about his final feeling, he feel two small hands in his--and then nothing.
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